Status Updates From Wolf Dawn (Forsaken Worlds,...

My book's POV is in third person. I know which character it's focusing on because of how it's written, it might say the name of the character, the gender, the thoughts, etc. etc.

Ash's mom learned a lesson in this book from Ash using "mindtouch" on an off worlder. His mom now knows not to be so ignorant and "too forgiving" with an off worlder.

If the author made Captain Forseth a woman, I think the plot would change. I don't think there would be any mind touch, I think there would just be a quick inspection of Ash's ship and ten they would head out. I think Captain Forseth as a man kind of has a bigish type of role in this book. Well some things DID go down with Ash's mother and Captian Forseth, which I'm not going to mention... *gags*

If I had to add music to my book, I would pick the song The Empty World - Dark Post Apocalyptic Piano by Walid Feghali. I think it fits the depression and death parts in my book well. It's a great song, 10 outta 10 would recommend it again. It's a good orchestral piece to listen to while studying.

In this book from about page 95-102, I was wandering away from the text to something else. This is because this part of the book started to get kind of boring for me to read as it was kind of bland and a little bit itself wandered off from the original plot of this book. I hope it gets better... I really do.

I think the plot of my book is believable. It has o do with the future and includes people/beings from other planets like Delian. The actual detailed plot of this book is actually pretty interesting too. So I think it's believable for a furturistic, scifi, fantasy, type of book.

In Wolf Dawn, I connect with Ashton, the main character. Ashton is very curious and kinda of nosy, which I'm like. He also keeps secrets from others, even family. I like to keep things to myself, there's plenty of thins I know that others don't.