Status Updates From Huone

So, I think it was great. Got interrupted a lot in the last 70 pages. And even more in the last 15 and worse in the last 3. Yet I still got fairly emotional. The slow beginning was a bit rough. The end was a bit slow too. But I think it’s exactly what the story wants so I cannot critique it. I also believe the POV really completes the story and I doubt the movie being outside Jack’s head won’t be as good. 4+ I think