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Merenwen Inglorion
is 5% done
So, I read up to chapter two...
A bit of long description, but this is fantasy so I was expecting that.
I was not expecting: "He chased the beast..." *three or four paragraphs of referring to prey as "the beast"* *finally kills the thing* *"beast" is revealed to be a hare*
My thoughts: It had better be a mutant hare. But no...
Also quite a bit of mixed sentence structure and my inner editor is screaming.
— Jul 14, 2016 03:19PM
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A bit of long description, but this is fantasy so I was expecting that.
I was not expecting: "He chased the beast..." *three or four paragraphs of referring to prey as "the beast"* *finally kills the thing* *"beast" is revealed to be a hare*
My thoughts: It had better be a mutant hare. But no...
Also quite a bit of mixed sentence structure and my inner editor is screaming.
Sarah
is 82% done
Not sure how I feel about this book. Had to put down temporarily because of the romance
— Aug 24, 2015 02:26PM
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