Status Updates From Betrayed by Love / The Roug...

This was pretty good. I loved the humor & the whole starting off on the wrong foot, enemies to lovers feel this had. It wasn't as good as it neared the end, & I didn't like some aspects. Things happened a little too quickly between them, & the ending was a little sappy, but despite some minor things, this was overall really enjoyable. So much better than the first story, & I’d love to read more from this author.

So glad to be done w/ the 1st story. The HEA wasn’t believable or romantic. Both characters sucked & the story sucked. Unredeemable, domineering, abusive, caveman hero. Pathetic, weak heroine. 2nd story: This has been rlly enjoyable. I haven’t wanted to put it down. There’s just some minor things, otherwise it's been pretty good. I love the sparring between the MCs, & the humor in here. I had to make myself stop.

This has been pretty irritating. Hero continues to be a jerk, heroine puts up with it. His lack of control is blamed on the heroine. One of the worst heroes ever. Story is horribly outdated and unacceptable in modern times. Ridiculous things in here, and stuff used as plot devices. I was really hoping I’d get done with this first story today. Hopefully the second story is a lot better than this.

3-11. pg77. This started out good, and quickly went downhill. The story has gotten messy, over-dramatic, and soap opera-y. Hero is a domineering jerk, heroine is pathetic carrying a torch for him all these years. The POV changes from one sentence to the next. This is similar to another of Palmer’s stories, but nowhere near as good.