Status Updates From Woman on the Edge of Time (...

Okay, I think I just had to get used to the writing/narration style. There are lots of memories & flashbacks that aren't explicitly separated but instead flow with the rest of the text. More playing with the themes of time travel, I think.

So far, I don't love it. Not sure if it's actually written this way, or if the narrator is reading this way, but it feels like a giant run on sentence. No natural breaks in rhythm, she barely seems to stop to breathe. Giving me a very frenetic, anxious feeling. And hard to keep track of changes in scene/action because I can't hear/feel the paragraph breaks.