Status Updates From Preta's Realm: The Haunting...

So it's getting more interesting now! I only wish there was more of Drew and less of Ravna. And even if Drew is freed from the Gaki, he's going to have to pay for the awful things he's done.

I'm not sure what I think. There's a lot of retellings of past events and I'm pretty sure I know who the murderer is. I think Drew needs to hurry up and lose it before I get bored.

There's something about the pacing. Like, it seems time passes too quickly within a scene, without me even noticing.

So, I have no doubt that the author can write but... this story still feels weak.