Status Updates From All the Sad Young Literary Men

On the 60th page of the book. In no way am I an experienced reader, so my opinion from that perspective doesn't matter all too much. However, I find the way both the men and women are written strange. To me, they are stuck in their routines and their odd behaviours almost seem glorified. I was hoping to see change within at least one character so far. Hopefully that will still come.