Status Updates From Crimes Against Magic (Helle...

I'm also really struggling with the complete modernity that people in the 15th century are displaying, there's no reason in the story for it to be happening. They're using whole giant concepts that didn't exist then.

Page after page after page of exposition. This needed a much better editor.

Entertaining but I'm having a lot of trouble keeping track of all of the many random Jims, Joes and Janes who keep popping up 100 pages after they were mentioned in passing one time.

Well, that was fine. I guess it's somewhat notable that the author lets Nate struggle against foes or situations, rather than just being OP and instantly defeating or solving anything. Nothing like the Demon Accords protag who can kill a room of 30 people in 17 seconds or whatever nonsense that was. The stakes feel more believable here.
Mordred being killed from a distance in the epilogue was kind of lame though