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First chapter was a little rough and could have used an edit for clarity. Manning kept yo-yoing in the timeline between being at the Barnes & Noble uploading the classified documents, and then how she got there, and then how she was at B&N, and then how she got there, and then more context, then back at B&N. It could have been told more linear and had more impact.
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