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Alex
is 27% done
the story starts off interesting, with engaging narration (writing in need of some proof-read) then the 'flashback' event starts. This part shows one of the MC having sign of an abusive asshole, and the other MC still gets off despite being treated unfairly. IMO, the story is not for me, makes me uncomfortable.
— May 28, 2014 01:21PM
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Julia ♥Duncan♥
is 60% done
Damn it, I am not clicking with this at all.
— May 09, 2014 09:53PM
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Sara
is 4% done
Oh Casey! You are beyond screwed. How the hell is this going to play out? o.O
— Jan 13, 2014 01:58PM
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Irina Elena
is 70% done
*nods vigorously*
And that's how you handle this kind of storyline.
Really satisfied with the way this is going...
— Jun 02, 2013 07:15AM
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And that's how you handle this kind of storyline.
Really satisfied with the way this is going...
Sandra
is on page 30 of 48
"Who the hell cries over something as little as this?" Umm... Just about everyone who's ever had a fucking breakup?!?
— Mar 18, 2013 10:25PM
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Sandra
is on page 12 of 48
Wow... I'm not sure which of these guys I hate more.
— Mar 18, 2013 09:25PM
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Elizabetta
is finished
Done. This was pure torture. High school English classes see better writing than this.
— Jul 18, 2012 03:35PM
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Elizabetta
is finished
soooo slow. so many issues with the writing, types, and other weird language on this one.
— Jul 18, 2012 03:34PM
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Elizabetta
is on page 40 of 48
soooo slow. so many issues with the writing, types, and other weird language on this one.
— Jul 18, 2012 12:57PM
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Elizabetta
is on page 10 of 48
hmmm...typos, spelling errors...
— Jul 17, 2012 01:39PM
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