Status Updates From Looking for Alibrandi

I haven't read this book since high school, when I had to read it for English class, so I decided to give it a re-read and see if I enjoy it more now that I'm not obligated to read it. It's still early in the book, but I'm worried I'm going to like it less than I did in high school. There's just already writing things that bother me. There are so many instances where a comma should have been used, but wasn't.