Status Updates From Line of Scrimmage

So Ryan has just about gotten his second chance, they are happy but her ex fiance is plotting evil against them. He is jealous that he got dumped a month before the wedding when Ryan came back on the scene.

Kind of reminds me of Susan Elizabeth Phillips's football books. We have an injured quarterback who's being divorced by his wife Susanna in 10 days. They've been separated for over a year, were married almost 10 yrs, and she is now engaged to her high school boyfriend who is safe. No excitement, anguish and heartbreak like she had with Ryan. Only problem is he shows up and wants a second chance.

I hope this gets better. This third-person writing is as robotic as they come.