Status Updates From Dark Escapes

Narration is good, great accents. But meh. Story not working for me right now. 🫠

Slow to start but getting better, not too dark though which it said it was.

The mmc somehow has a superiority and inferiority complex. It’s really weird.

Why the fuck does the fmc keep “moaning” and “groaning” whenever she eats? Like it cannot be THAT good babes.

The scottish accents and words are kind of cringey. Saying “och!” or “aye!” all the time doesn’t qualify as an actual response. Also, why does the mmc keep saying “I could kiss her” about OTHER WOMEN? I get it’s just an expression, but this just does not bode well for the obsessive, stalkerish vibe that he should have considering he’s a love interest who chases her. That’s basically an archetype.

So far, it’s a decent plot with bad writing. I don’t like the mmc either because he tries to be dominant with nothing to back it up. He’s kind of annoying and there has been no build up to any sort of chemistry.

For fucks sake your dad freakin sold you get a damn grip

Stupid shoot them both