Status Updates From West Heart Kill

Blerg!

Almost at the end and still I don't really care who killed who and why, because the author chose to lecture me during the story, and that made me want to stop reading. So, in all those "how to write a mystery story", I did a quick scan and didn't really read it. I'm sorry, man, that was not interesting at all... I don't want to know how to write a mystery, I just want to have a good time.

Well... the story has progressed, but my enjoyment has declined drastically, because this horrendous narrator can stop talking about everything else, interrupting the story and making useless remarks.