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The dialogue is just not that good honestly. And after the 50% mark when they made it off the island it just kind of got boring. It was a whole “will they won’t they” thing which didn’t feel like it had any impact knowing how they feel about each other. At about 80% I am just struggling to get through the rest of the book. The pacing is still weird as well. Nothing is happening in big chunks of time.

The passage of time is a little strange I think. I don’t think it’s a bad thing but there’s weeks and months passing and things like injuries/sickness don’t hold as much weight because of it. But having the passage of time like that makes it interesting to see a lot of different things they are going through