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Just read THAT chapter… iykyk

Chapter 3 is massively fucked. Like. So fucked

I picked this back up a few nights ago and read some of the most over the top, disgusting stuff imaginable…it can’t really get worse from there so I’ll likely keep going.

Rushes to get to the gore too fast. Leans HARD into being an “extreme horror novella” to a cringe-inducing level. “Read at your own risk cunt-face!” Really? Stupid character decisions. The geography of the locations Jeanette goes to isn’t explained well. Very basic writing. Unnecessarily over the top. Has promise, but I think this will go nowhere and just lean on gore and shock value.