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Rushes to get to the gore too fast. Leans HARD into being an “extreme horror novella” to a cringe-inducing level. “Read at your own risk cunt-face!” Really? Stupid character decisions. The geography of the locations Jeanette goes to isn’t explained well. Very basic writing. Unnecessarily over the top. Has promise, but I think this will go nowhere and just lean on gore and shock value.

I’m genuinely so spooked 😭