Status Updates From The Summer She Went Missing

Okay three things
1. The burner phone is Mrs. Covington’s
2. The ‘she’ clip was from Maddison’s pov, not Audrey’s
3. It’s Solomon or someone we haven’t met yet who’s acting as a serial kidnapper

The dialogue is so cliche and I hate how every word is all bunched together. I don't know if this is a Kindle formatting thing but there's no paragraphs whatsoever.

TERRIBLE. I cannot make it further in this book, I’m not normally one who gives up on a book but man, it’s so boring. I cannot continue!