Status Updates From Knives and Feathers

"What a hunk. Wanted to keep him all to yourself, didn't you? Is he the reason you left so soon last night?"

Chester, what a dick move!

Leaning in closer, she flicked her hair back to reveal her long, smooth neck and trailed her fingers along the curve to the slopes of her cleavage. Chester understood very well that this was meant to be an erotic gesture, but he preferred the angles and stubbly roughness of a man's throat.

2nd that!

"Speaking of which, what's your name?" Chester asked.
Sighing, the other man shook his head. "You don't need to know my name to fuck, do you?"

This guy seems to be all in favour of straightforward communication

would've been more if I'd been left alone at lunch

Oh Sheridan........*sniff sniff*

OMG. Noooooo....!!!!!

and now when you tell me the "old nymphomaniac" is "out of her depth" in her job iy does not help. There is no purpose to making the female charatcer in a position of authority incompetent. So why have you done it?

I am very unhappy with the portrayal of the femal secondsary character. Marlowe has taken a competaent professional and turned her into an over-scented, flirtatious, insensitive joke. Her behaviour is so ludicrous. Women do not try to pick up every male that crosses their path.