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Not the amnesiac story I was expecting… and that’s not a bad thing. — 3.75

<< The most intriguing and interesting part to me is Cal realising what an awful person he was and dealing with that. It was a great third arc conflict with a bout of noble idiocy that actually makes sense. I wish we saw more of that human conflict.

This one will stay with me for its potential.

Really interesting and different. The build up was great, but felt aimless for most of the middle. Is it a dark, introspective of what makes a personality? Is it a paranormal mystery? The paranormal came late and felt like rushed exposition in the end. The introspection didn’t dig down enough to be satisfying.>>

It could have ended here but god said no cyra there’s 100 pages of Who the Fuck Even Knows What left

I actually hate Donut

I feel like this could be cut down to like 300 pages max

“Haha guys look at him he likes reading vampire diaries and fantasy” YOU [redacted] THAT IS NOT FANTASY RAAAH

Chat this is so sad

Someone make this stop I’ve read 100 pages of nothing

There’s this very strong urge to get out a red pen and correct all the mistakes I can find in this book

I hate that Cal is 38 and reads like a 14 year old boy after the accident, it’s a major ick. Okay he lost his memories of the important details of his life but he’s still an adult man

I’m intrigued by this premise and gonna push through because I like the characters, but tbh the writing is starting to get to me. I don’t need to be re-told what all happened every 3 pages… yes you watched Tangled and ate donuts yes yes I get it you’re different now… fuck…