Status Updates From The Raven Legacy

This "book" is nowhere NEAR "pay for me" status. I've made my notes public on Amazon... I have a headache from this book! I'm wondering the age of the author. My 15 year old knows the plural of wolf is wolves, but the author apparently doesn't. And the "..."'s are out of hand. This book should not be for sale. There might be a great plot going on here, but I can't see it through the myriad of mistakes.

seriously, if I see "..." anymore, I'm going to cry!!!!!!!

Also can't stand when a book only has one rating on Goodreads and it's a 5 star from the author.

so many notes being made.... I hate doing an editor's job! Beta readers!!! If you can't afford an editor, GET BETA READERS!