Status Updates From Rentboy

I don't care a bit if it's unrealistic, I'm really liking this!!!

Eddie!!!!

Me estoy muriendo cada vez más con los personajes. Hay cosas que jamás hubiese pensado que fueran a ocurrir. Fox... Quiero abrazarlo fuerte y decirle que todo va a estar bien.

...and now there's pony play. *throws in the towel*

Dear authors: All I ask is that you keep your own facts straight!

Are the twins thirteen or fourteen, Alexander? I mean, I don't care either way, but I DO care that you pick ONE age and stick with it. Details MATTER! Of course, Fox is such a pathological liar that I'm sure you could try to pass this off as intentional douchiness. *howls in frustration*

I can't take it anymore!! That's the second time Eddie hasn't noticed that his "willy" is hanging out in public!? I'd certainly notice if I went out of the house topless! Who the hell are these characters (because they are certainly not rooted in any reality I'm familiar with)!?

I am trying to decide if this book has reached my threshold for patently absurd and/or just fucking weird plot points yet. I'm going to press on a bit, but I foresee a DNF in my future...

Fox is a Lying Liarson. How do you expect to build a relationship on this level of deceit?!

Holy crap! This book has a LOT of stuff going on. Some is interesting, some heart-breaking, some just plain weird. It's exhausting to keep up with it all.

*snicker* I'm not sure that I can take a book seriously when an MCs refers to his penis as a "willy"; it's just so juvenile.

Wow. I didn't see that coming.

"Oh God, i'm sorryyyyy!" Cum spilled out of his willy ..."
OK this is the 3rd reference to Willy... I can't deal! He is 30 not 10... its make me feel like a PEDO

I cant get passed the fact that a grown man just called his dick willy dear Lord

This book is a bit s and at silly and at parts unrealistic. and the sex scene are just ...well strange. But I love the characters so much and really felt bad for them when things went wrong.