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Ahlam Mustafa
is on page 100
The writer trys to make you ask questions and search for more information about what you already know. You might find the building up of the events a bit soulless and the characters a bit unreal, this might be due to the author's focus on content rather than style. Take it as way to get to know what the Middle East thinks and how they reacted to the event more than it being a profound literary work.
— Oct 20, 2013 09:23AM
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Furbjr
is on page 157 of 258
I like the way the story is flowing, but there are a lot of hurdles in the way of my enjoyment of the story. This has turned from a leisurely read into a bit of a headache, owing to a lot of awkward language usage and syntax problems. So instead a fun read, I'm obsessively proof reading and editing this book.
— Jan 20, 2013 12:05AM
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Furbjr
is on page 153 of 258
THE STORY IS GOOD, but thee is Mich editing to ne done in this book.
— Jan 19, 2013 07:01AM
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Furbjr
is on page 88 of 258
I am quite enjoying this book. However, it is apparent that the writer is not a native speaker of English. Some of the words he uses are not formatted correctly, or are just strange choices for words. I think careful scrutiny by an experienced editor would have served the author/audience really well.
— Jan 12, 2013 11:08AM
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Furbjr
is on page 59 of 258
I am quite enjoying this book. However, it is apparent that the writer is not a native speaker of English. Some of the words he uses are not formatted correctly, or are just strange choices for words. I think careful scrutiny by an experienced editor would have served the author/audience really well.
— Jan 07, 2013 04:01AM
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