Status Updates From The Wyoming Cowboy (Daddy D...

"I need your mouth more than I need life," he cried softly.

Oh, gag.

Before leaving Sandusky, she'd searched half a dozen shops to find something modest. Other women didn't mind being scantily clad, but she wasn't comfortable walking around like that.

UGH

"After losing your husband, does it bother you to be around other males again? Is that what this is about? I've half-suspected as much."

Who talks like this?

The more he thought about it, the more he was convinced this was her first experience being around a man again in such an isolated environment.

Or maybe she just doesn't like you, bub.

Maybe she hand't been around other men since her husband's funeral and didn't feel comfortable with him or any man yet.

What.

From the length of her sinuous body to her blond hair gleaming in the morning sun, she was a knockout. But she didn't seem to know it. That was part of the attraction.

Blergh

This isn't very well-written.

A caustic laugh escaped from him. The cough he'd developed in Afghanistan would never go away, and no one could convince him otherwise.

This is such a sweet story but I feel like my outlook is convoluted given my tie to military. Personally, I think it is kind of selfish for the hunky cowboy to go after the widow. She's vulnerable.... But still cute story nonetheless

WARNING: This is pretty difficult for military spouses to read :/

It's good so I don't want to stop, but it is unnerving...

Pretty presumptuous to give a 6 year old a toy gun with ammo without asking mom first... this whole operation is sweet, but I would be weirded out...