Status Updates From She Kills Monsters: Young A...

If these character all supposed to be teens, and this version is for teens to perform...there's going to be some angry parents with sexual connotations. They are far from subtle.

This is something...

"Violence makes me hot. " 🤨 I really don't think this "Young Adventures" edition is really something for high school students.

The scene, while containing some quips that might garnish some laughs, is really short. They all have been so far, which isn't necessarily bad, but it's not great either.

Scene one might be a little uncomfortable for some readers to reade (and perform), but it was too terrible. It is definitely proving to set up for what might come next.

I really hope this "sweet thang" type of stuff is a one time deal; it will be extremely disappointing if this turns into some creepy DM stereotype that isn't really true if most DMs.

The prologue was cute, but some of the action descriptions might be harder for a smaller school to do if they were to do this as a production.