Status Updates From Show and Tell

Normally I'm not a fan of time lines that flip around but in this case it is 1. essential to the story and 2. very well done, I'm not getting confused and the author is building a very good plot here. Can't wait to see how this turns out, so far, so good.

Oh, here we go down the rabbit hole!
He said...he said...
she said...she said...
no, no, that's not right...
he said...she said
nope, sorry it's he said...he said...awww crap, pay attention boys and girls because I think things are only just beginning to get interesting, lol. This could seriously be fun.

...finished...have to let it settle before any rating...

ok so far...some smaller niggles.
Just wishing I'd have more time for reading than 1...2h / day at the moment :o(
*going-to-sleep-now*