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Jen_C
is 48% done
Wonder if Claire wears anything besides turtlenecks.
— Jun 12, 2015 10:21PM
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Beate
is 92% done
The grammar and punctuation, among other things, is all over the place.
— Apr 17, 2012 10:04AM
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Beate
is 64% done
You can count their relationship in days, if not hours - and already he's told her more lies than she is comfortable with. But dang it if she doesn't forgive him?
Books are an escape, but whatever world they're written in, I'd like for them to be at least believable.
— Apr 17, 2012 09:00AM
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Books are an escape, but whatever world they're written in, I'd like for them to be at least believable.
Beate
is 52% done
First of all, didn't even take them 2 minutes to jump into bed on their first date. Hell, date hadn't even begun just yet. And the dance between the sheets was so short it took me longer to write this than the scene itself.
— Apr 17, 2012 08:12AM
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Beate
is 31% done
OK. There really isn't a whole lot of "showing" going on here, it's all dialogue and blah-blah-blah.
— Apr 17, 2012 07:23AM
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Beate
is 27% done
They sure have no chemistry for someone who just "took her heart away".
She's bratty, annoying and needs a reality check. Yup. A real winner this one...
— Apr 17, 2012 07:16AM
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She's bratty, annoying and needs a reality check. Yup. A real winner this one...
Beate
is 24% done
For two people about to hook up, they sure don't seem to like each other...
— Apr 17, 2012 07:11AM
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Beate
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O.o Um... Already repetitive. And you would not tell someone you met five seconds ago about how your last boyfriend was married...
— Apr 17, 2012 07:04AM
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