Status Updates From A Topiary

i like the ending, don't care much for the fighting

alright i see where the topiary comes into the picture. but to what end.

there are too many kids. and of course the girls don't really play a part in the story. i know they will create a four legged machine/creature but idk what thematic or emotional relevance that will have.

done with what was apparently a prelude to a completely new set of characters doing their own things. i can see the search for answers in every little thing in the world being a metaphor, and the fact that amanda and acre find out it all lead to nothing felt substantial.

i dig it so far, even if im not entirely certain of what level of surrealism it's opersting on. the dialogue is very carruth