Status Updates From Hollywood & Mine

A little confusing sometimes. POV shifts a lot. Some editing errors. I do like the characters though.

Just a wee bit of hiccup. Chugging along now! :)

I'm a little bit confused...

I've confirmed it's Supernatural fanfiction due to a find-and-replace error ("Castile returned the look evenly") and a quick Google search. It strikes me as a little clumsy and I feel like it's a waste of money to purchase a story that's still available for free, but that aside, I've enjoyed Hollywood and Mine for the most part. I only wish the characters would have two-sided conversations.

Somehow I can't get into this. I'll read a few more pages, but I already see another DNF looming...