Status Updates From Omega Rising (Omega Force, #1)

Omega Rising (Omega Force, #1) Omega Rising (Omega Force, #1)
by


Status Updates Showing 1-30 of 341

order by

Damaged142
Damaged142 is 10% done
This is probably the fastest I've ever picked up and then put a book right back down. The writing is super basic. "he did this, he did that, he paused, he hesitated." all very repetitive."the night was cold", "the aircraft was obviously damaged—badly—and it also had obviously landed, not crashed". Telling us what is happening and failing to show it.

Maybe I'm being too harsh, but this failed to capture my interest
Sep 15, 2024 10:54PM Add a comment
Omega Rising (Omega Force, #1)

Amber
Amber is on page 93 of 190
Mar 03, 2024 06:30PM Add a comment
Omega Rising (Omega Force, #1)

« previous 1 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12