Status Updates From Everything the Darkness Eats

It’s a no for me. I stopped at “the gentleman’s shapely ankle” who talks like that? And who is looking at ankles?

I think I like the overall story so far but I really hope LaRocca fired whoever edited this one lol. Lots of weird sentences, overuse of the same words (really likes “admonition”), and some minor inconsistencies with the plot.

i don't know how I feel about this. my attention wasn't really focused on this an ounce until about the 30% mark and i'm kinda just riding this one out. we'll see if it ends up being redeemable