Status Updates From The Art of the Deal

It doesn’t get better

I have two options here: dnf and return the book or read it to the end and write a rant.
I give it another 5-10%

Now it looks like a dog training. Le's try a new trick, Sean, say my name. Coleman. Again! Coleman! Good boooy... >,<

Tsk!!! Why did the female character have to be such an entitled bitch?!?! o_O;;

At least this one (judgey jerk) realized he's in the wrong. And judgemental. And need to make things right. And... and... and... (Keep on grovel, Mr. West!!!)

DNF, unrealistic, unbelievable actions and reactions by supposedly professional men, especially because there's a boss/employee-intern relationship which could be potentially legally damaging, and these two are lawyers! aargh!

After prick-attorney decides he might have been hasty in his opinion of Sean -because Sean is beautiful and he wants him -he takes him to a dinner, walking him to his door, going in to ck his apt. What? Sean now is a girl?

I am disliking intensely one of the heroes, what a judgmental prick -though I can't imagine what type of lawyer, forms an opinion without having all the facts. He's an idiot and a lousy attorney.

wait, isn't this guy a lawyer? like, a really powerful one? Why would he beat someone up instead of persecuting them?

i'm not sure how i feel about this one. i don't have it, but i'm not sure i really like it either...

everything seems to be happening awfully fast...or should I say Coleman is moving awfully fast?

I get it already, jeeze quit beating me over the head with it. I GET IT!

Still very confused as to Coleman, it's like he has 2 different personalities and what's with Brittany? Really, move on girl.

Still don't like Coleman, pompous asshat.

I really don't like Coleman, at all!

Use contractions.

*Sighs* Arsehole.

Hmm. I don't like my MC's to be such HUGE arseholes.