Status Updates From Talon (The Falcon's Nest Tr...

Long chapters are not my favorite lol

I like the hint of biblical themes in this dystopian so far. The writing seems to be overly simple and characters seem a bit surface level but it is classified more as Young Adult so it works well for that demographic. Plot seems predictable but only time will tell.

Talon seems to suffer from what many 12-16 years old do, a lack of understanding that other people are, in fact, as complicated and nuanced as they are.
Also, if the author continues to use two ellipses per page, I might just strangle something.

I’ve counted at least 4 times a question has ended in a period, not a question mark. Guess I’ve found my new pet peeve.