Status Updates From Lady Isobel's Champion (Kni...

Not much plot in this. Instead there's lots of the MCs thinking why they can't *possibly* reveal ___ or ___ to the other person because reasons. It's always the same sticking points, & always the same reasons. Zzzzzz...

"I shall be at your command & shall stop the moment you give the word." ....Because of course we simply MUST establish a wedding night of complete & utter consent on the bride's part. -______- STFU, stupid pc tropes.

Can't say I'm overly impressed thus far, but maybe it'll pick up when they reach the tourney...? There's just so much lint-picking & navel-gazing. An action sequence could only help things along.

Hm. Interesting story hook...but a boatload of introspective feels. We'll see.

'Light from a narrow lancet fell directly on him, giving Isobel an impression of long limbs & hair that gleamed black as jet. One look & she sensed impatience in him. Here was a man who was not used to waiting for anyone. Isobel recognized the square jaw & regular features, but not the ragged scar on his left temple.'

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