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"Delicious is a drink of cool water when you're very, very thirsty" I mean...not where I thought the story and Ardis's involvement was heading, but yeah, I guess that's acceptable.

I like how the key/whistle comes back into the story after the prologue. Very nice writing detail, imo

I like the woldweller

King keeps saying "by Harry" and idk if it's just a figure of speech like our "by Jove" or if Harry is actually an important figure in the history (probably not in a story this short).

"Of course [arguing over what "delicious" means] is silly," said the Prime Minister impatiently. "But a lot of serious things start silly."

Start silly/stupid and started by people with the most power, ain't that the truth...

Ooh, I love the little map at the beginning. I'm a sucker for books with maps that show the land and everything. I am wondering what a "woldweller" is, though...