Status Updates From Bloodraven

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“You, I liked. And,” Bloodraven folded his arms, cupping one elbow
and idly stroking his chin with the fingers of the other hand. “You’re
property of mine, so it intrigued me to see how far they would bend in
interest of what I might offer.” PAGE 255

Even in suffering he was beautiful, like the paintings in the ruins of cathedrals. Like the plundered statues, graceful even in decay.

This does not mean that you’re not my enemy. That I don’t hate you—for everything you’ve done—just because you lay a gentle hand on me. Just because you’re half human. The other half is what makes you a monster. I’ll kill you if I can.

“You came after me. Against the geas, you came after me.” IM GONNA CRY HOW DARE BLOODRAVEN BE LIKE THIS AFTER ALL THE THINGS HE DID

Back to reading dark shit🥀

Aww I wish there was more to the ending.. like, they JUST reunited, and it's over. Give us a little more. An epilogue. I know there's like a graphic novel or whatever, but uhh.. it's ugly........

Why the fuck did the author think ah, yes, let's have Yhalen fuck someone else now?? Ew. Ew ew ew.

Reviews made it sound like this was a brutal, violent sex fest from start to finish, but I am very pleasantly surprised by how much other stuff is going on. Like, there's not even as much sex as most of the shitty romance novels I've suffered through lately. There’s a plot! Honestly, no idea what's going to happen through the rest of the book, but it seems like you're just fine if you can get past chapter one.

Okay, I'm enjoying this quite a bit so far, but it really needs some editing. This is why we have proofreaders, folks.

I wish there weren't illustrations included in here.. not because they're graphic or anything. They're just kinda bad.

The wiring is decent, but a little confusing at times, like it could have done with another edit/proofread to improve clarity.

Wow. Kudos to the author for making me care about a character who literally dies in line one.