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Loving the whimsy and warm tone so far. I’m a little perplexed on where this story will go, and what the point is, but I love the perspective and thoughtful pondering. It’s summer in the first 20 pages.

This chapter (featuring John and his departure) is so heartbreaking. Reminds me of the lyrics “I hate you for what you did, but I miss you like a little kid.” And I realized that the gap in the memories we all have is probably for the best. If we are able to remember all the despair we have gone through, everyday would be a mourn for the past.