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exposition through dialogue not handled very deftly, especially when we already have interludes from the narrator serving the same purpose. think ‘oh yeah well what about [begin explanation of event]’ ‘yes i remember [event]. wasn’t there [further description of event]?’ ‘exactly. that’s why [more event description both parties should know based on their grasp on reality]’

just introduced a german character then the reader gave him a nasal slavic accent