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Woman who raised her. Raise from the dead? Lose her magic. *Mom* She didn’t know the consequences. A rooster got jumbled up in that too. Ha. It was not fresh though. Zombie chicken.

It typically bothers me when contemporary authors don’t trust their readers to understand subtext. It hasn’t been too bad in this book, but at 57%: Sera wonders if Luke has been drinking or on magic mushrooms. Then she asks “have you been drinking? Are you on magic mushrooms?” This could have used another editing pass.