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Alex
is on page 101 of 146
The scenes don't seem to advance, it's like going around in circles. Characters not properly introduced.
— Aug 12, 2015 10:14PM
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Alex
is on page 75 of 146
Some of the stuff that bugs me is, that the author has no idea on how a nursing home is run and how the court system works.
— Aug 09, 2015 05:51PM
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Alex
is on page 45 of 146
There's a few grammar issues, and a few present and past tense issues, looks like the author over looked some things.
— Aug 07, 2015 08:45PM
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The Reading Writing Puppet
is on page 33 of 174
Interesting, so far it deals with memory loss, drug abuse, alcohol abuse and I think the main character is a sociopath. Or has some sort of personality disorder, so th s book also deals with mental health.
— Aug 03, 2015 11:29PM
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