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this was a mistake

Very hard to read. I did not finish this book.

By this point, I've already seen misspellings, a question with a period, a statement with a question mark, and an unannounced change in setting. This decent story is buried beneath errors that make it laborious to read. I shouldn't find myself proofreading. I normally give the benefit of the doubt to a fellow writer, but this is too much. It's a good early draft, but not ready for publication.

I don't think satirical works well with me. I don't have this kind of humor and all the "take the opportunity to sell books, people are stupid, " is bothering me. And it doesn't flow. And some parts are totally uninteresting. Baaaad choice.

Just passed a boring part. I hope it'll improve now because it's crazy to skip in a so short book.

A rare case of "I don't like the writing but enjoy the plot". Luckily, it's short.