Status Updates From Armada

This is still pretty lame so far, but now that the story has finally kicked off (after 100 pages) hopefully there'll be something to enjoy down the road.

“That’s how you know you’ve mastered a videogame—when a bunch of butt-hurt crybabies start to accuse you of cheating in an effort to cope with the beatdown they’ve just suffered at your hands.”

60 pages and the plot hasn't moved an inch...c'mon. Also, I never want to read another sentence about "Oedipal torments" again.

Yes, it's goofy as hell and badly in need of an editor. But it's not like it's completely without an original voice, even if it heavily echoes Wade's sardonic narration from RPO.