Status Updates From The Garden

Protagonist seems obsessed with death. The mouse. The moth. The miscarriages. She is also unbelievably annoying. Complains about her husband not sending letters from the trenches but then immediately says how she understands, then ccomplains still, rinse and repeat. It's like the author is inserting their own thoughts and trying to justify everything within the book rather than writing a beleivable character.

Overly descriptive of settings and feelings. Protagonist seems to be starting shit and against this whole process for not obvious reason. She came for help but doesn't seem to want it. Stubborn. Why is she even there?

Protagonist seems to not want a baby, showing signs of depression, but does want the baby to please her husband who she thinks desperately wants one. She also showed that her husband is her "good influence" and she must "try harder" to hold her tongue without him around.

Immediately dark! It’s immediately dark!

DNF

DNF