Status Updates From The Dark Huntsman (Tales of...

And DNF at 54%. This isn't bad; it's just not for me.

I'm just having a lot of difficulty buying into this as a retelling of Snow White.

2013 edition, very awkward formatting. It's okay, not really my thing.

He inhaled her scent of sunshine, dried grass, and the faint underlay of sage. Earthy, warm garden scents that awoke in him an aching desire to extend this moment—this rare pleasure of watching a woman sleep.
She rolled over, the edge of the sheet pulled tight across her full breasts. His breath caught.
She might be worth it—Worth the risk of hiding her. Worth the baiting from his relatives. Worth the queen’s wrath.

Maybe it's just the fact that this is the ebook, but was there any editing done on this thing?

I had to stop reading. While the sexual tension between the two was getting on my nerves some time ago (I just don't see why they don't just get it on!) now she goes all bitchy and dumb. He wants her to stay safe. She NEEDS to go out, put him into mortal danger, put herself into mortal danger, stomp around and let everyone know she's still alive and doesn't learn from her first near-death experience where HE got hurt