Status Updates From Vision (La Guerre des clans...

It’s definitely started to pick up mor. I would love to see more fights and starclan things. And suppringly squirrelflight, brambleclaw aren’t in this book to much? They are but they don’t have much of a speaking role. Even when THEIR the parents of the three. Idk, it’s rly weird. I want to see more of leadpool, I feel like we’ve just been dragging the book.

It’s very slow paced. But now since Millie & graystripe have joined the clan it’s started to pick up a bit. Nothing too notable in the book has happened, unless you count gray and Millie ofc. Idk it’s started to get a bit better and less dragging than before. I’m starting to enjoy it more!

I think it’s rather slowly paced at first. Maybe it’s a me thing since i know what’s going to happen. It feels a bit different than let’s say moonrise where at the start it had clan duties before the omen from Starclan. Idk, just very slow paced. Maybe it will pick up later on

Chapter 7
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Chapter 6
1:38

Chapter 5
1:33

Chapter 4
1:26

I Lowk feel awful for Hollykit & jaykit. Knowing what’s going to happen to them later on. Hollykit wanting to be a medicine cat and jaykit wanting to be a warrior and everyone treating him differently. ALSO they hinted at squirrelflight not being the mother to the three a bit too early on imo. “When she didn’t have milk” or “she always leaves the bursary to sleep in the warriors den or do duties.”

Chapter 4
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Chapter 3
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Chapter 2
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