Status Updates From Their Unexpected Mate (Para...

With dialogue that is as stilted as this, I don’t think I’ll be able to read much:


“You really are,” she said softly. “Still, I’m sorry that I have wet your shirt with my tears.”


“We will need to ensure that we happen upon her at the movies.”


And it’s not set in the 1800s so I’m predicting a DNF. We’ll see though!

Hearing cursing makes the h's teeth ache?!? Blah. I really dislike this chick.

Add 2 little doves to the list of endearments. :-/

“If the bond isn’t solidified when we meet our bond-mate,” Mac spoke from her side quietly, “if the bond isn’t solidified within a month of meeting our bond-mate, we go crazy.” These repetitive sentences are annoying.

Being half animal, half human drives them to insanity, apparently. They were fine before meeting their mate but now that they have they'll go totally insane if they don't all mate with her, at once, within the month. *eye roll*

And they're immortal. I am not liking this world very much and I have 10 more books of the series! Oh please get better!

And they're immortal. I am not liking this world very much and I have 10 more books of the series! Oh please get better!

Oh dear lord, the book has turned to creationism. And dinosaurs were "prototypes".

Aw, only 5 babes.

Adding 27 honeys to the endearment list. I think the total is up to 368 now.

OMG on top of all the other endearments there's 120 baby's in the book! Could these guys just not remember her name?!?

Very disappointed, there's only 1 sweets.

I missed one, sweetheart, there are 11 of them.

Ever other word seems to be an endearment. Getting so annoyed I did a search. The results: 40 darlings 55 darlin's 31 Kats 33 kittens 4 sugars 5 sugahs 28 loves 13 my loves 209 endearments seems to be some serious over kill. And all the dropping of the 'g's is annoying too. All the words you are saying end in 'inG'!

At their first meeting Mac was described as six foot eleven "at least". Now barely a chapter later he's being described as three inches shorter than one of the other guys, Trey. BUT it was just said that Trey is six foot nine. So is Mac 6"11' or 6"6'?

37% in, chapter 8 and she's only, just now, mating two of the guys that will be her mates. Up to this point they've basically been stalking her. Not really liking the way this is playing out. I sure hope it gets better, I have all the books in the series. Gonna be bummed if this book turns me off the series.