Status Updates From Claws and Starships

The last story was short, really short, and didn't have much of a climax, even during the drug induced vision. Compared to the previous two stories, this one just felt like filler.

'Rosettes and Ribbons' started off a lot better than the previous story had. The events of it however did take a short while to build up to the climax, but the building of the story only enhanced the climax when it occurred. I actually had to stop just before everything went down to do some house work, and all I could think about was getting back to the book. A very good read!

"A Distant Sun" - The start of this story was slow and I was wondering where it was going. But as the story continued, and the relationships built, the end of the story left me with more than one shed tear. Overall a wonderful story that I will be reading again in the future.