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Tarl
is 69% done
The last story was short, really short, and didn't have much of a climax, even during the drug induced vision. Compared to the previous two stories, this one just felt like filler.
— Jul 27, 2013 07:46AM
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Tarl
is 58% done
'Rosettes and Ribbons' started off a lot better than the previous story had. The events of it however did take a short while to build up to the climax, but the building of the story only enhanced the climax when it occurred. I actually had to stop just before everything went down to do some house work, and all I could think about was getting back to the book. A very good read!
— Jul 06, 2013 08:48AM
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Tarl
is 32% done
"A Distant Sun" - The start of this story was slow and I was wondering where it was going. But as the story continued, and the relationships built, the end of the story left me with more than one shed tear. Overall a wonderful story that I will be reading again in the future.
— Jun 18, 2013 06:54PM
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