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Angie
is 8% done
"Whatever past training he had received was apparently so ingrained, that he noticed all the details without any conscious effort."
This feels like lazy writing to me. Please don't tell me this; go ahead and describe all the things he notices, or have him mention something in a tense conversation later, but don't just tell me this is what happened. I want to experience the reading of the book as if I'm in it.
— Jan 23, 2019 04:55PM
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This feels like lazy writing to me. Please don't tell me this; go ahead and describe all the things he notices, or have him mention something in a tense conversation later, but don't just tell me this is what happened. I want to experience the reading of the book as if I'm in it.
Bob Case
is 40% done
Just can't work up the interest to finish it. The author hasn't drawn me in to either the characters or the story
— Jul 26, 2015 02:52PM
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