Status Updates From The Not So Super Hero

Still enjoying this story! I did see some of the reviews on it, and very briefly I almost started to lose faith; but that’s your opinion! We all have our own opinions, and our own tastes, and we are entitled to them as long as we can respect others.

Definitely love the building of Zane’s story, but I hope to soon learn more about Bailey! Hopefully not much longer as the stakes are being raised!

I am actually so surprised by how far I have gotten with this book; I haven’t been able to put it down! Just with my last comment, the story flows, easy to follow, I love the characters so much! This is a story unlike other ones that I have read, because I keep wanting to turn the page.

Great read so far! I am loving the characters, the story’s pacing is steady and immersive, and I love how creative the author is! The development between Bailey and Zane is so cute; I am so curious to learning more about them and their individuality and progression as a pair. I’m starting to get lots of speculations about Zane’s potential mutation and what more to Bailey’s story than meets the eye.

I keep getting sucked out of the story by silly mistakes. “He reached for Zane’s throw.” :((

I very badly want them to have the “what are we?” talk ( ˶•ᴖ•) !!

Moving … to the training facility … with Zane … for safety (˵ ¬ᴗ¬˵) now we’re cookin with gas

Fweakin finally ( ʃƪ˘ﻬ˘)(˘ ε˘ʃƪ)

JuUuUust kiss already

Disregard previous update; I misread! This one’s on me

My apologies (づ ᴗ _ᴗ)づ♡

On page 69, Zane‘s apartment is described as a studio, but on page 70 it’s described as having one bedroom. A studio is one big room (no bedroom), a one bedroom apartment is a one bedroom apartment

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I just found another error (˃̣̣̥ᯅ˂̣̣̥) pg 13 paragraph 2 “relieving crushed cars on the street below,” I assume this is supposed to be “revealing”

Badly in need of editing

Pg 12, 4th paragraph: “Martin bagged her to share.” Presumably this was supposed to be “begged.” This is there are two or three others that I’ve noticed and it’s only pg 12 ( ;﹏; )