Status Updates From Riding Through Fire (The Dr...

This feels like a bad mash up of hunger games and fourth wind. So far there has been no dragons, just boot camp.
There are some mc’s that keep calling the fmc “chubby” all the time. Her only defense is to ignore them instead of standing up for herself like she does with everyone else. These are adult men calling her names. I do not know any adult that behaves this way. Immature writing just for drama.

I almost DNF and honestly, there was probably 6 chapters that I read the first few paragraphs of and skipped the rest. This book has a poorly designed plot and character development is nonexistent. FMC and side characters degrade everything about herself every chance there is. The ending is rushed; the book doesn't flow until like the last 50 pages. Would not recommend / would not continue the series.

The writing is immature, the plot follows too closely to other books and has lots of gaps. It's been a struggle to get to page 163 much less desire to finish the book.

DNG