Status Updates From Lore of the Wilds (Lore of ...

Not bad so far, i have some notes but im enjoying it.

“Any sacrifice that I make will be worth it if we can become our ancestors’ wildest dreams.”

She sure got a lot of plans for smb that can’t do shit

Again same thing previously a bunch of plot gaps not much flow and random time jumps. There is no background on any of the characters we don’t know how they feel beyond what they say and that is frustrating. This is a book with an awesome albeit repetitive story line but her execution of the story is weak and a bit boring.

Okay to be fair I’m enjoying it a bunch more than I was previously. I love the new characters (isla and Finn) they add so much more personality to the original characters (lore and Asher). I really hope this doesn’t turn into lore forgetting abt Asher bc Finn is introduced Asher has done way too much for lore for me to be okay with that lol. Still corny just a bit better

Same feeling from my previous note it’s better than what it was before but it’s still missing that foundation and that strong storytelling still no real connection with any of the characters. Their whole make out scene at the inn was also just a bit random.

It’s not all that good of a book. There’s not a lot of depth and I don’t have any connection with the characters. I wish there were better descriptions of them and who they were as people and what they looked like. It’s just kind of a flat book not very concise. I don’t feel the depth of the relationships like I would want to. There’s just really no sustenance to them. But I’m trying to finish the read.